Rough Copy 1 & 2 Feedback
- Cut down some clips so that it isn't too long. E.g. the smoking scenes.
- Try using some different sounds instead of one sound playing throughout the whole title sequence.
- Reconsider if you want the flashback to be created as it may give away too much of the plot.
- Make the story line more clear that the jacket belongs to the brother and the wrong person has been killed.
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